Once apon a time there was a dog called Puff liked to eat bunny and lollies . He was a Chihuahua a Labrador .
He was a big , fluffy dog with a small face. One day he was sniffing for lollies he found a lolly pop . then he ran away ops I forgot to tell you that that he doesn't like lolly pops.
I like the description of the dog Sophie. Make sure that you use correct punctuation - full stops and capitals - very important for Reader Courtesy. :-)
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Cool story Sophie I like the way you described the dog!
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